Todays lesson

In today's lesson we all evaluated each others work and gave them feedback. We did this so we know what to improve on and to also get different opinions off different students.
My targets are to complete my article and to the correct register. I also need to make sure that i use the same use of fonts throughout so it follows the same theme. Especially the mast heads. I found out the simpler the font the more effective. I also need to consider a different style of image for my front cover as it is classed as inappropriate. This is because she is wearing very little in her photo, although i framed it so it does not fall into the male gaze theory, as she is looking away with her head down and is using her arms to cover herself. Therefore she is not inviting the reader in a seductive way. However people still might find this inappropriate as she is wearing little clothing. This image fits with the theme of trance and is suitable for the theme but is not seen suitable for an A level piece of work. A mid shot would look effective and i need to identify what style would look good and that would go with the theme of my magazine. A magazine we analysed today was framed well and had an inviting look. This is the look i want to create.